Dancing Display Stand
Prima Donna – critique, please. It has to be constructive.?
Prima Donna dances under her pink lace medallions and heart shape directory display quality. She begins to sink, black sweat in acid trance public institution of their skin on fire. Prima Donna watches, seems progress and begins to mourn. Not a hair curls over his head to perfection. And she stands like a cactus can, Alto and ignorant of the area around it and never take a step towards a Return or causing chaos.
I love it. No Cliché and simple rhymes. I like its structure and flow. Good pictures too. I can only comment .. About cactus stanza … I would like to add another descriptor of the line .. catcus as "cactus is cemented as a" distorted her soul dry "Tall and ignorant the area around it, I do not know if that's what they intended to … but even if you just wanted to add and what (hard) as a cactus .. I think it would can stop if you indifferently This particular line .. I think it should be the way it was maybe you can add a title based on the mystery of the harm he has done. Other than that, I think it's a beautiful poem
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